een777's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[GG - Egg is Gangsta]

ummm 2 years, more like 2 weeks

ok... so i thought the beginning was pretty good and a good introduction to w/e u were gonna animate but then it automatically switched to some stupid repeating animated egg with his hand moving in some kind of "gangster" fashion....

personally, i thot it was a bit stupid, ppl don't wanna see the same thing over and over again (look at ur reviews) unless its jus that addicting which this isn't.

try makin a plot for starters, and add in a party scene wit music like that playin, i can definetely tell u have a good understanding on how certain kinds of music connects with the theme of the animation.

you got great graphics at the beginning and decent animation too but wen u went to the dumb egg scene it just turned your overall score from a 9 or 10 to a 3 or 4. srry man :(.

vBulletinClock responds:

een777, more like NIGGA PLZ

[Ask Al: "Animal Heaven"]

wow!

wow, u definetely have a wierd style of animation but i luved it!

i can tell ur main skill is synchronizing the video with teh voices and i think thats wut it made it so good w/o the viewers realizing wut it was. that bird talked nonstop throughout the whole animation... that was amazing and other voice animators should take lessons from u.

ur style was good, even though their was alot of graphics and not much animation u did in a way that made it really good!! great job

the voice acting was perfect for the whole geezer pigion..

i didn't really start laughing until the end of the movie cuz i knew if i started laughing i wouldn't get the rest of the story... great job on the humor

interactivity kept me watching to see wut happened next in the story

oveall.. u are a fantastic animator and should make another "ask al" animation! great idea and great movie!

[Stick Shorts II]

semi good job

great job on the animation part and synchronozing the timing of the hand and the pencil with the drawing... i have a few complaints tho

from the first 5 seconds, i could tell that the drawing of the hand was too good to animate so i knew it would be flying everywhere instead of acting like any normal hand. at least attempt to animate it by splitting the hand into like 10 different layers and have them move with each other to simulate that its not just somebody else moving somebody's arm that they cut off.

matrix spinoff with the guy dodging the bullet, i've seen that millions of times and it gets old. try to come up wit ur own ideas and make fun of somtn every1s seen but no1 has had the guts to simulate. even i've done the matrix bullet dodge thing in one of my animations and it got blammed in about a half hour. but this animation shows much more promise then what i've done in the past.

other then that, keep up the good work... u did an xcellent job creating the hand and pencil but i suggest sacrificing a bit of detail for some decent animation to make it look real.

and lastly

[Nido Studio]

never finished...

ok i never finished the video because it got really old wen the video froze so that the loading could catch up wit the playing.

i strongly suggest the next video have a loading screen for us poor folks who can't afford blazing internet connections. plz!

otherwise, from the first ten seconds of wut i saw it was pretty good, the graphics weren't too good but it had sort of an ipod commercial feel to it 0_o. it was decent.

[Matrix -- Real Life]

needs work... alot of it

umm... wow what a great little 20 second film u had there 0_o.

i can tell ur a good artist by the graphics of the person u created but wheres the plot, wheres the entertainment?

i would suggest making a series of scenes from the matrix movies and put them together instead of doing just one spinoff.. it would give a much greater effect to the audience. work on the voices, work on the annoying sound when the bunny thing comes up and put some more work in to the animation. all i really saw was a computer screen popping windows up and a guys mouth moving? go to help in your flash program and look up motion tweens 0_o, it will help u alot!!!

oh yea btw, i luved the oldschool style song u had at the end! good job on that. it fits in with the low graphics on the computer.

G3K responds:

I know, the plot's a bit of a niche subject. I very nearly didn't submit this on the basis that it'd be too obscure. :\

Animation-wise, yeah, I know about motion tweens and such forth.. I used them for the opening code scene. I just personally feel that they're overused in Flash and felt like giving frame-by-frame animation a go.

Aanyway, thanks for the critique. ( '-')b

[Super Mario bros Z ep 2 (old series)]

fantastic job

you won 1st place in my book...

i'm dying to see the next episode, you have a great plot, awesome sprites, and an incredibly fitting style of music to your video.

keep up the good work.

[StarCraft: Reconnoiter]

good job

wow good job on the starcraft flash and an excellent job on the 3d graphic art.

great plot
great idea (brings bak memories)
great music

and a job well done on developing the characters and their personalities

keep up the good work!!!

[Stay]

needs work

srry i tunred it off be4 it finished it was that boring..

need work on animation, a better song

good job on the grpahics