een777's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Stick: Breaking the Wall]

can some1 say welcome to newgrounds?

well that was better then i expected...

for a first submission u kik @$$!!!!

i look forward to ur future submissions, next time try to semi put a plot into ur stik thing so ppl don't kill u wit that wen they review it.
also, did u happen to watch dragon ball z be4 u made it or did u come up wit the hair and the blasting beam by urself? if u did good job on that part but if u got the idea from dbz, i suggest noting somtn bout it in ur credits cuz wen u get way high up there (and u will!!!) and u base ur stuff off of other commercial things then ppl will kill u wen they figuire out that u stole the move from some other movie or game and that u didn't even put it in the credits...

just advice.. it was perfect but needs to be a bit longer, at least a minute and a half.

Blue-Hand responds:

thats right, i was inspired by dbz, but i thought that everybody know that; however i will write it now.
thanks for review

[EXTREME Solo]

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well... obviously ne1 can tell that u know how to play guitar well or else u wouldn't be able to animate that hand technique into ur flash.. but a few things

their wasn't much of a point to it, ur entire focus of animation was based around the two ppl's hands and arms. and the lights moving with them. u need a bit more to it, wheres the drummer? and who are they playing for? wheres the stage?
u need a good setting

the animation was very very good wen the music tied into the guitar that they were playing.

overall, somethings missing in the animation, it just didn't hit me like any other would.

Zotz responds:

LOL, i don't play guitar :P when they're shredding, their hands are loops of really fast movements, then i tweened that into roughly the right places. the reason not much else is going on is because this will actually be playing during the credits of the complete Extreme Physics show.

[GG - Egg is Gangsta]

ummm 2 years, more like 2 weeks

ok... so i thought the beginning was pretty good and a good introduction to w/e u were gonna animate but then it automatically switched to some stupid repeating animated egg with his hand moving in some kind of "gangster" fashion....

personally, i thot it was a bit stupid, ppl don't wanna see the same thing over and over again (look at ur reviews) unless its jus that addicting which this isn't.

try makin a plot for starters, and add in a party scene wit music like that playin, i can definetely tell u have a good understanding on how certain kinds of music connects with the theme of the animation.

you got great graphics at the beginning and decent animation too but wen u went to the dumb egg scene it just turned your overall score from a 9 or 10 to a 3 or 4. srry man :(.

vBulletinClock responds:

een777, more like NIGGA PLZ

[Matrix -- Real Life]

needs work... alot of it

umm... wow what a great little 20 second film u had there 0_o.

i can tell ur a good artist by the graphics of the person u created but wheres the plot, wheres the entertainment?

i would suggest making a series of scenes from the matrix movies and put them together instead of doing just one spinoff.. it would give a much greater effect to the audience. work on the voices, work on the annoying sound when the bunny thing comes up and put some more work in to the animation. all i really saw was a computer screen popping windows up and a guys mouth moving? go to help in your flash program and look up motion tweens 0_o, it will help u alot!!!

oh yea btw, i luved the oldschool style song u had at the end! good job on that. it fits in with the low graphics on the computer.

G3K responds:

I know, the plot's a bit of a niche subject. I very nearly didn't submit this on the basis that it'd be too obscure. :\

Animation-wise, yeah, I know about motion tweens and such forth.. I used them for the opening code scene. I just personally feel that they're overused in Flash and felt like giving frame-by-frame animation a go.

Aanyway, thanks for the critique. ( '-')b

[Beetles]

good job

good job on the art work, i kno it takes a lot of skill to draw like that using a mouse and keyboard so keep up the work, as for animation, that needs a little work

great music, didn't quite get the plot if their was one and a bit gory for my tastes, im not sure if every1 likes to see beetles crawl into dead peoples bodies 0_o

Blueled responds:

and.... i was using a wireless mous (shit one) thanks