een777's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ode to a Spider-man]

need some work on the animation...

Graphics- sorry but this doesn't cut it for todays modern expectations of graphics in a movie. The only parts that had any animation were when spiderman was climbing, swinging, etc... An animation movie is not just floating pictures on a screen and animation i consider to be 2/3 of the graphics score. The background needs alot of work.

Style- You had an ok style, but it just seemed like you tried your best to make good pictures that just went exactly along with the song. I know its a music video but you coulda came up with some better ideas for some parts.

Sound- This one I give you a good score because its a great song. Though I would love to see someone do a music video animation that hits the top 10 of the week without it being a Wierd Al song or having it make fun of something. Just something by an artist who has plain out good directorial and artistic skills.

Violence- lol, I don't even know why this is a category. What does violence have to do with your score? So what if you don't have violence, it can still be a great animation. *Sigh*

Interactivity- The usual which I give for just a play button, a loading screen, and a replay button. If you want higher interactivity, you will definetely get it if you make a game to play while your flash loads. Just somtn stupid to keep the audience occupied for 2-3 minutes.

Humor- Thier were a few parts where I knew you could have made it more funiner but overall, it was funny. It would been laughing if you showed Peter Parker's face at the part of the song where he turns Mary Jane down lol. But whatever floats your boat.

Overall- It was good flash, but definetely not the best I've seen. I guess some people just give you great ratings because they can relate to the humor of the song (since everyone has seen spiderman).
What would really kick @$$ is if you made an awesome music video that hit the top 10 of the week that was about something not many people knew about. I get tired of seeing really good artists with original ideas get shut down on this site because some guy made yet another animation about a popular movie/game. Try to be original.

I hope you read this, if not then I guess I wasted my time.

[Robin's Ride]

good animation... needs some work tho

ok...

animation was overall good but you really need to work on your animation skillz... your a good graphics artist but just cuz u can draw something well and have it float around a screen does not make it a good animation... take the part where the guy was walking towards the camera with the gun supposedly pointed towards the camera 0_o. from what i saw it looked like somehow he was holding the gun as if it was pointing towards the camera but the gun itself was pointing to the left..

the car flip scene was a little long.. i reccomend when the cars were flipping u shoulda used an ease effect to make it more realistic instead of the cars just stopping all of a sudden...

mayb its just me but i still like to hear sound effects even if their is background music... unless this was a music video which it isn't... so at least find some nice sounds for your weapons when they fire is all u really need.

style- this is a big one... from my eyes u basically completely copied mr. krinkels style in his madness video. u left out the arms and legs of each character, leaving nothing but he hand and foot and u made the overall video very slow paced and with lots of gore... srry man

interactivity- play button and i think u had a replay button. not sure... if ur flash is as big as this one i reccomend scene selection for ppl who want to view thier favorite scenes again...

humor- not really any.. but i don't blame u for not puttn ne in cuz humor would ruin the overall theme and mood of the animation...

overall.. it was good work..

[Crows' Life Episode 2]

great animation

umm... wow

u are a great animator and i would at least expect this to get in the front page if not #1 of the week...

[Pipeline Labyrinth]

LOOOOOONGGG MOVIE WOW!!!

screw the sprite haters... u did an awesome job wit this flash.

this is not mentioning that it is the longest flash i have ever viewed on newgrounds ever.. their might be a longer one but this one takes the cake.

i luv how u combined the idea of 007 and Mario together... it was great. i can tell u did some thinking wit the story and putting it together becuz who would've thot that mushroom kingdom and the darkworld would go to war LOL!!

sometimes ppl like u amaze me wen they release somtn like this... too bad it didn't get a 4 or above :(... but let me tell u.. with as much work as u put into this, i would xpect this flash to have at least a 4.3.. but ya... GREAT JOB!!! keep up the good work

[Dendyn Dynasties]

wow

that is an INCREDIBLE animation!! You did things in flash i didn't kno were possible.. keep up the great work.. i hope the story is as good as the graphics!

[SillySheep&TheHedgehog]

kind've annoying

the graphics were good, the animation was decent but the sounds got really really really annoying. especially wen the viewer can anticipate wuts going to happen next in the movie and that hte sheep is going to make the same exact sounds after he realized he can't get to the top of the cliff after climbing on top of another rock.. find a different sound or somtn cuz wow!! very anoying, the background music was good though

the group did a good job, kind of a pointless story but o well.

[Pissed Off and Armed]

good but didn't seem original

i can tell u put alot of work into this movie but the style seemed like a rip off of madness. sounds for the guns would be really good and would probably make the movie one of the top 5 for the week. try to keep the same idea but speed it up, it seems like everything was slowed down alot (similar to madness). creating ur own style would be really good too or come up wit a new idea instead of a bunch of ppl in a xiao xiao style arena trying to kill eachother for no reason.

movie seemed like a mix between xiao xiao and madness..

but overall, it was pretty good, i was entertained.

[Mods day out]

well...

I guess I can give you some slack because its like the first of a series or somtn like that and its a lock movie. Graphics were good, animation was good, I had absolutely no jigombilated idea what the plot was but ya, it was an ok flash. Try to make it a bit longer plz.

peanutbutterclawk responds:

ooookkkk.....

[My 100th Flash]

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ok i don't get it at all.

u had a great opening, and it seemed as if it was gonna lead up into somtn really really good then that shit came up. but all the viewers may think it sux but if the creator thinks its good stuff then by all means, do not make ur stuff off of wut u think viewers would like but wut u like

i've never watched ur previoius stuff so i don't kno if this movie fits in wit ur style of animation be4 but if it does, keep up the good work. take in the criticism u can use and ignore the rest of the bs.

but for me reviewing, i didn't think it was that good for a 100th flash. srry :(.

[Stick: Breaking the Wall]

can some1 say welcome to newgrounds?

well that was better then i expected...

for a first submission u kik @$$!!!!

i look forward to ur future submissions, next time try to semi put a plot into ur stik thing so ppl don't kill u wit that wen they review it.
also, did u happen to watch dragon ball z be4 u made it or did u come up wit the hair and the blasting beam by urself? if u did good job on that part but if u got the idea from dbz, i suggest noting somtn bout it in ur credits cuz wen u get way high up there (and u will!!!) and u base ur stuff off of other commercial things then ppl will kill u wen they figuire out that u stole the move from some other movie or game and that u didn't even put it in the credits...

just advice.. it was perfect but needs to be a bit longer, at least a minute and a half.

Blue-Hand responds:

thats right, i was inspired by dbz, but i thought that everybody know that; however i will write it now.
thanks for review