Score: 8

"decent... far from perfect"

submission: Sonic RPG eps 8

date: April 8, 2008

here are some things to help u out if u make another one of these...

- put alot more emphasis on making each character's voice sound unique. i kno you probably do all the voices, but try to do something (possibly put each character's voice in goldwave and do something different to each one) so its not as easy to figure out that the same person does each character.

- wen characters are talking, put less of a time interval between each person talking but not too close... i think your just a little stretched from the normal balance pause that ppl are used to.

- just a thot... possibly make the intro shorter... i mean i kno ppl can skip it but its still outrageiously long for simply being an intro. after i watched the intro, i thot i just finished the movie :p

- their was a good choice of words in the script but the voice acting dumbed it down a bit.

- oh ya and if ur going to make them fight dbz style or alvin earthworm style (kicking and punching the dude around in the air)... u gotta do it alot faster because your making the audience have to wait for the boss to slowly move through the air and reach the next place where he gets hit.

- can't really critique much on the "game" part of the flash since im def no expert in actionscript... the att's/skills were pretty good but imo i thot the boss had too much hp, but then again, some ppl actually spend the 20 minutes on this flash to kill him so ya.... shout out to the ppl who are bored lol.

overall, the movie was decent but I think that alot of improvements coudl be made.... the potential is there, just gotta unleash it..

Score: 5

"to the organizer..."

submission: Madness___Collab

date: April 6, 2008

whoever put this collaboration together (the fla file) seriously need to put a little more effort into it... my advice to everyone is to not right click and press the pause button because it totally effs up the entire movie... many things repeat themselves and a few of the videos had no sound at all.

btw, guys appearing randomly out of nowhere is what i call lazy animation.

nothing new or original or creative... just another group of animation junkies trying to leech off the credibility of someone elses work.

Score: 8

"it was ok..."

submission: The Art Of Animation II

date: April 4, 2008

not nearly as good as the first, like most sequals, it was lacking in alot of things that the original brough to the viewers.

animation kinda seemed choppy to me, may i suggest a higher framerate?

also the "scene selection" button or w/e doesn't work, mite wanna fix that lol.

Score: 10

"lmao..."

submission: Thwomps: The Parody

date: April 1, 2008

i woulda blammed it if it wasn't from the original author... but nice april fools lol :P

Score: 10

"awesome job"

submission: Mastermind 3

date: March 31, 2008

first review?

Score: 10

"effing hillarious"

submission: Chatty Katty

date: March 31, 2008

that was one of the funniest thigns on newgrounds that i've seen this year... plz make more!!!! :)

Score: 10

"lmao"

submission: Looking Up

date: March 24, 2008

that was so simple and so funny :)... keep it up man, i enjoyed the original taste in music as well.

Score: 5

"needs moar..."

submission: Madness Combat 2008

date: March 23, 2008

more action.... and make the movie faster paced... viewers don't like waiting 20 seconds for the guy to walk to a certain area to shoot somebody...

Score: 7

"it be ok"

submission: Sprite DEvolution: Farts

date: March 23, 2008

wasn't incredible, but it wasn't bad.... hope the next piece released is better.

Score: 10

"wow nice!"

submission: Adregalus Heritage

date: February 4, 2008

so how do u draw those textures out in flash lol?